The writing is decent enough. Cool drum loop, cool melodies...it's just all a bit repetetive. It doesn't help that the instruments sound weak as well.
You need more oomph somewhere. Turn up the drums! Turn up the melody! It's not just a "volume" issue (as I could turn up my speakers obviously), it's an issue of it not sounding powerful enough. Listen to it at a lower volume and compare it to other songs at low volume. A well-mixed track will still have power to it.
Fortunatley that's mostly a matter of experience/software familiarity. Tweak the mix, bump up the EQ, use some compressio - it'll really give the track some life.
Thanks for the tip regarding mastering, but how would you suggest that I make this track less repetitive?
I like it!
That drum loop is killer. Didn't hear much variation in it but the track didn't need it.
This is definitely original and the samples are great.
The melody is off beat for a second there... but thats an easy fix.
I hate fade outs... but thats just me. It fits the track.
I quantized the drum loop to sync up better with the rest of the song.