I had to download it.
Yeah, I never hear music like this on newgrounds. It makes it unique. I loved the piano parts, very well composed. I give this song my a 5/5 and a 10/10. Cool song. Hey, do you think you could review my new song "D.B. Clust"? That would be really awesome. Keep up the good work.
Good music withs some mistakes
First to say: the playback doesn't work I had to downoad it - but no problem. It's always a great pleasure to review a song one of yours.
To the track: I loved the melodies and the arrangement of instruments. The first half was a like a big adventure and the second half was peacefull and calm. But there are some things that annoied me.
To start from the beginning: the piano was at the start okay but after a while it became harsh and a bit too loud. Especially at around 1:30 - I think the place and the mood would have required a more softer sound.
Oh after this are the slow strings again. I don't have to say I think you know I love your melodies and that gitarre was a great idea.
That breake with the flute was a bit sudden and not really good. But at 3:05 the slow strings are coming again - now I can feel myself flying. Great strings, great flute, great choir and the gitarre was a great addition.
After listening quite a lot of your tracks I think there is only one big problem with them. You definitely got great skills for melodies in a wide range of emotions - but the composition and to make these melodies solidly connect to each other are some practise needed. I mean the cahnges between the parts are too rough and there are no soft fade outs or fade ins. Now in this form I could feel like LEGO-blocks passed next to each other rather than one piece long.
But besides this your music is really enjoyable - I'm in love with your slow strings as you know. So some more practise with the structure and you're tracks will be fantastic and outstanding.
Keep it up Bosa. I think it's in you!
Yes, I believe I'm improving on transitions. So, thanks for the review, the advice, and the inspiration to keep going! It was well needed.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.