nice tune! pretty funky, i really like it! feels good to see a catchy song on here every now and then :D
the only things i'd look into would be:
- you have a beat with swing. apply that to chords and melody as well!
- add a few more changes very four or eight bars to keep the listener interested
- add a bit of sidechaining for the drums
hello there! thank you for your feedback! i only made this for fun so writing an entire mega-melody was not on my mind at the time. i understand what you mean about the swing. and there is sidechain in this song, i just suck ass at sidechaining.
i will certainly keep your feedback in mind when i am working on my next melodic track. thank you so much for this feedback! and thanks for listening!
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