Some issues with levels
Again, like the Cillit Bang! track - the vox samples are messing this up. There seems to be a very disturbed flow - you start with a straight 4x4 kick which is a bit poppy - but then it's just dropped and replaced with an effected loop that sounds out of place - there should be a better transition - the same thing happend again with the next beat that comes in - there doesn't seem to be enough to connect the dots.
Your levels are off a bit - some things are too loud and other elements are pushed back too far into the mix.
Overall this is a solid 3 - too many little problems and not enough redeeming qualities to offset the negative aspects.
Thanks, like i've said i don't have very advanced equipment so mastering and such is very hard.
I'm just experimenting with different things im not a big audio buff.
As an example when you said a solid 3, at first i thought I wonder why he gave me a 6........