A little harsh.. as another guy said, more synths maybe more deep bass. A great concept though, could really make this a awesome song.
This is..... No offence but attrocious. It needs to have synths in it to be trance. It's more techno. I have a very unique taste in Trance, so trust me. This has way to much drum and bass. It should sound like the song "Back From Space". It's to loud and annoying. I can tell you put effort but keep trying. You have to make a more southing touch. It's too rough. It's like sandpaper. Make it sound silent then a bit louder, like space should be. Maybe after that it will sound much more appealing.
I review right away
Weird user name you got there. You said you were new with FL so I'll be extra nice on review. Pretty good effort being new to FL. Doesn't seem dancy enough to get me moving. Maybe add some drums through whole song instead of taking them away in some parts. Also add some more harmonies and buildup sections. So 5/5 voting keeping your score at 5 until blammer day tuesday and umm 9/10 review. Can you review and VOTE for my song "carnaval charMS" please. I need more votes too before tuesday :)
Lol yeah, it is a tad weird isnt it. Long story actually, it started as an inside joke. Thanks for the review, I'll review that right now :D
like the top reviewer said : its pretty generic. meaning there's nothing much special about it. what he meant was , that, there is no "plot" for the music and its going at one line. for an example : you have few instruments running with almost like random tones. which is not reflecting anything. when you make a music, you have to make it reflect something. like stress, relief, etc in some points of the song. only near the end you have something like that. note : its much better to have interesting chords that together make a plot
another point : you have to make a better ending , don't stop it at the middle. one more thing, this song doesn't sound like trance. it sound like dance or techno, when developing such styles its recommended to insert some effects inside like reverb, chorus, equalizer ..
i can't tell there wasn't any effort in there. next time keep those rules and you'll end with a much better piece of music
Ok, thank you :D I'm a beginner when it comes to FL/electronica, I've only been at it for about a month and a half. This was mainly a song I tried to make as trance as possible, so I think that's where the generic sound stems from. As far as I know, trance is supposed to have repetition, building melodies, and no climax, as well as no real drop-off point. Well, anyway, thanks for the review, that was a lot more helpful than the guy below you :D
doesnt stand out
this sounds like a pretty generic trance piece, and it doesn't have a very full sound.
k now you have to review some of my music.
Hm ok, that doesnt really tell me much. Now I have no idea what to improve on. So, in return, I'll do a vague, pointless review of something of yours.