It is an effort, at least you did something. But I recommend some "atmosphere" of the loop. Also, it is just too plain. But nice effort.
1. "This is my first song, so don't judge me." If you don't want to be judged, then don't make it public.
2. Of COURSE it's Beepbox. Why wouldn't it be? That's exactly what Scratchers use.
3. For the record, this is about average. I know how the tool works.
Are you seriously following me around just to hate on me? I could report you for that.
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