Cool Song Not Much I Wood Change
could've been so better
that music idea had potential! its really bad that you blown it away and instead "made something up" in 30 minutes. the piano was good, the drums were good, the guitar needs a little tweaking , more in the bass, less scratchy (time to get a new plugins?) if only you could spend a little more on this music it would've been better, such as changing the music sometimes (especially the piano) and stuff like that.
This is a good song--its just evident that you only spent 30 minutes on it. Work could have been done, especially, on mixing. I liked the piano, and with the beat it was pretty good. Its just that it was very repetative, and that wouldn't have bothered me because you wrote a pretty complex guitar riff that could've diverted my attention from that. But because you left the beat and especially piano so loud during the guitar part, it was hard to ignore what should've been the background. Also, the song was pretty short, and it didn't have any real depth. There was nothing, on the second listen through, that I could pick up happening behind the beat, piano, and guitar.
Still, I did like the beat and the piano. The guitar was a bit screetchy, but it was still pretty good sounding. I also liked the end, how the piano just kinda wandered towards the finish of the song.
So overall, this is, what you said, a nice rock song that you only made in half an hour. I would be interested in hearing an extended version with more depth and work on mixing. So good job.
If you have the time, could you listen to my newest song, "Beliefs Breaking Away"? I'd really appreciate a listen and a review.