This is cool! Im not the most pro reviewer ever XD
Thank you very much!
I'm beginner :D..
TBH that doesn't sound like Trance to me.
The beginning sounds more like Drum N Bass.
Try to improve your pad a little bit and see what happens when you remove the dark layer since I think that some kinda disturbs there.
Overally I like your idea though.
thanks for (sorta) reviewing my latest, here's your return favor.
(beginning - 0:20) - nice fade in, but bass is a little overpowered during the low end of the filter sweeps
(0:21 - 0:42) - nice way to bring back the theme from the intro. good bouncy beat, but i feel like the snare could have packed some more punch. synths worked together nicely.
(0:42 - 0:45) - not a fan of this transition, needs more leading into the dropoff or I'd flow right into the next part
(0:45 - 1:06) - cool synth part here with the delayed attack, but it does peak a bit before the beat pops back in. rhythm synth has a good build to bring back the main theme.
(1:07 - 1:49) all the parts come together here pretty well. It does start to drag on a bit, could use some parameter tweaks on the synths here to have them play off each other better. could easily work as a video game theme
(1:50 - end) - piano part is ok, but it doesn't fit in at all with the rest of the song...maybe have it start off with it instead?
pretty good work here. melody is catchy and all the parts of the song all have merit. needs more fluidity in the transitions and dynamics throughout to keep it rolling. I'm trying to be constructive here, so try not to take it too personally...
OMG Thank you very much!!!~!
I really appreciated your feedback :)
This is a lovely theme and it progresses nicely :) The piano arpeggios were a great ornament too. Personally, I'd wanna hear the piano play an F# Major chord just to resolve the song on home base again, but maybe leaving it on a C# expressed your idea better. Good job Dowon, thanks for sharing.
Oh, thanks! and thanks for taking the time to listen :)
Me like it:,)
Me too! thank you :)
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