More Trance Then Techno
OK, where shall I start. First of all by mentioning that if your new to writing music, then well done, you've picked it up quickly.
The synths suited the style of the piece and the melody was nice, but at the same time needed to change. Maybe be brought up a 5th or something as it got a little repetative.
You didn't over power anything which is always a good sign.
The general backing synth section was used well. Overall this is a nice start and a good first submission.
Maybe something to take into consideration is that this song needs to develop more. Change the beat perhaps as the piece moves on and add some new melody synths.
I'll give 5/5 as i'm sure you'll be mindlessly 0'ed at somepoint. James
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.