So the drums at the start don't really work with the beat and throughout the song, there is a honky-tonk piano playing the same note over and over again, which is annoying. It's definitely overused in this song. The melody is good, I like how you incorporate that into the song.
At the end for the last 30 seconds, it's just the same thing over and over again, which is repetitive and annoying.
Overall a good song with a good rhythm
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