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Too short

~~REVIEW~~
Fast loop you have here its kinda differant but its really fast, you should probably make it abit longer if you can, maybe slow down all the differant {SUND/FX's} i like the drums and stuff at one point seems like there is running steps or something but its still a neat little process, but again this was just too {SHORT} add more to it, more longer sounds and have more of a build-up somehow, its just too close together everything is all bunched up, {SPREAD} it out some, but anyways it was notbad, i liked it for a little loop that it is, hope to see other versions later, thats if you still make stuff.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Spread out the sounds abit its too bunched up, also making it longer with more of a tune would also be a nice touch.

Cyberdevil responds:

Thanks for the review!

Sweet

I liked it, a bit random, and too short. Really liked most of it and how everything wroked, when my gut instinct said it wouldn't, the main critism I 've got is for the end didn't fit with the song and made it not a loop, but everything else was good :D

=Review Request CLub=

Cyberdevil responds:

Thanks for the review!

Nice but short

This has the beginnings of a good tune, with the well displayed properties of making the title of the tune related to the tune itself.

It really needs to be something longer, in order to make the grade, but at least you've got it looping nicely.

[Review Request Club]

Cyberdevil responds:

Thanks for the review! Maybe I'll make a longer version of this . . .

totally hear the 'warp'.

The way you switch up the rhythm of the melody is kinda cool.

The end beats lead well into the starting 'airy' sound. However, I don't think it sounds great as a loop - I just find that when a loop of this length has one part that stands apart (here the end/start) it just makes it more obvious it's a loop and makes it slightly more annoying after extended periods of time than it otherwise would be.

Also, generally, I'm not to keen on that kinda attention-grabbing fast instrument.

.:Review Request Club:.

Cyberdevil responds:

Heh, yeah, glad you semi-liked it.
Feedback much appriciated! I'll keep workin.

\m/

It sounds interesting and does loop quite well. But I think the ending doesn't really fit with the rest of the loop.

The beginning is very good and you manage to create a good atmosphere. But the ending just sounds out of place, the change in style is too abrupt and so the whole atmosphere you created with those warping sounds is lost from one second to the other.

Also, this is too short and sounds a bit unfinished. Just as if you planned something big with this and then all of a suddend lost interest in it.

{ Review Request Club }

Cyberdevil responds:

Unfinished? Hmm . . . I suppose I threw this together in quite a hurry, but I didn't really have any bigger plans for it. Anyhow, thanks for the comments!

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