I've give you a 5 to keep you up in the list.

Awesome ideas but you need to be mixing your drums better. The kick needs more OOMPH, the hi-hats are nice and the arps used are well mixed and fit together. Around 1:00 your hi-hats are a little loud but don't take anything away from the track.

1:35 the arp here is awesome and deep. I love that sound!

I can see you're pretty new to whatever software you're using (FL Studio isn't it?) you definitely have the ideas.. just need to work on the execution :) Keep it up!

Nice work !