I like the catchy melodies at the beginning and the cool counterpoint at :18. The pacing is pretty fast here, and I think it needs a bit more cohesion. The sound design is neat, and overall it’s pretty smooth flowing, but I think the composition would be stronger if you consolidated your ideas more. The ending felt rushed, and overall the structuring is overly convoluted IMO. Still, the mastering was solid, and the quirky mood and instruments hit this piece home. Keep at it, ConnorGrail! ;)
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