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Uploaded
Jul 24, 2017 | 10:14 PM EDT
File Info
Song
7 MB
5 min 6 sec
Score
3.50 / 5.00

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You are free to copy, distribute and transmit this work under the following conditions:

Attribution:
You must give credit to the artist.
Noncommercial:
You may not use this work for commercial purposes.
No Derivative Works:
You may not alter, transform, or build upon this work.

*Please contact me if you would like to use this in a commercial project. We can discuss the details.

Score:
Rated 3.50 / 5 stars
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Genres:
Electronic - Dance
Tags:
dance
song
electronic
melodic

Author Comments

A song I made in about 4 hours-ish. I started for the NGUAC, and it evolved into something i really liked.

Hope you like it!

Reviews


johnfnjohnfn

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

== This is an official NGUAC Review ==

This is a pretty fun and enjoyable piece - the main melody is pretty cool, and the way that you add additional instruments in order to keep it interesting is a good idea.

Unfortunately, this track has a rather large problem with it - the mix. When you get into the drop, the piece completely lacks any sort of bass whatsoever, and the drums are far too quiet. Try comparing your song side by side with other songs to see if the levels seems appropriate or not.

This one is definitely a bummer to me because with a good mix and a proper arrangement that was trimmed down to, say 2-3 minutes, it could do really well!

Mini-scores (not used to calculate final score in any way - just so you know what needs improvement):

Arrangement: 2/4
Composition: 3/4
Sound Design: 2/4
Production: 2/4

Overall: 6.6


myebye responds:

Damn, well, thanks for the feedback! I'll keep it in mind next time