A decent melody. The drums sound pretty clear. I would completely scratch out the intro. Maybe it would sound better if it was more smooth like the rest of this song. Keep it simple.

The 8bit -like bass sounds cool. I like the pluck thing at 0:50

Fix the transition after 1:00. That section didn't make sense. cut out the kick and lead in with a reverse crash or something.

Not sure what you are doing with those drums at 1:40. Pick one loop and stick with it. If you were to add more then bring up the volume over 4-8bars.

Work on the transition at the end to. Everything just cuts out for no reason.

Keep at it.