I like the tranquil mood. Cool use of rhythm in the drums. The sound design is enjoyable, too. I loved the puttering sound at 1:22. Naturally, it needs a bit more of a sense of direction and progression, as well as some melodic content. Makes for a good mood-setting ambient piece, but as a stand-alone track more is to be desired in the composition. Keep at it, Rahmemhotep! ;)
Yeah, it ain't done, but I figured it'd be better to submit what I had than to just drop out.
Nice, I love the calm vibe to it, gets me nostalgic for some reason