== This is an official NGUAC Review ==
I have to say, this piece started out really strongly with those cool sounding electronic stabs and a neat progression. But then the piece goes in a super weird direction, almost as if you decided after you laid down those stabs that you didn't actually want to write a dance song at all and a more weird sort of ambient techno thing was more your flavor. Nothing wrong with ambient techno, but having both the dancey stuff and the techno stuff in the same song is... a little surprising!
All in all this is an interesting song. It's a bit hard to give feedback on it - nothing is horribly wrong about it, but nothing stands out to me either. I suppose I'd suggest focusing on one of the ideas in a song and expanding it rather than gluing a bunch together though, that might help give a more cohesive and interesting listening experience.
Mini-scores (not used to calculate final score in any way - just so you know what needs improvement):
Sound Design: 2+/4
Wow, this is beautiful!!! 4/5 8)
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