Where's Aluminium? :(
Author Comments
This is Magnesium without Eruption's edits. I originally had his edits posted here but the majority of the listeners preferred my version, and I honestly preferred my version as well. He has some very good techniques, but they aren't really compatible with the way I make songs. I unpublished the edited version as a result.
There's one particular part that sounds slightly off-key to me but Newgrounds is weird and won't let me upload updated versions so I guess this is how it's gonna be. ;A:
OMG!
You have improved so much from your first song in the elemental series! From the beep-boops of the instrument you mainly used to this is just amazing. A tip I could give you right now is to master it a bit more so it doesn't have a "cluttery, staticy" noise (I have no idea how to describe it lol). Great song, and I will look forward towards the next element (I forgot the periodic table already)!
SirHadoken responds:
Thank you! :D
I actually have no idea how to master, so that might be an issue :p I'm still not entirely sure whether or not I've made big improvements on a small portion of music production, or if I've made small improvements on a bigger scale. It's interesting to think about. ;p
The base in the second part of the song sounds a bit too gritty, I think. The melodies overall could use a bit more extreme variation, I can hear the variation, but they still sound a bit similar. The instruments throughout the song are fairly good, but what you used for the last melody, at 1:53, should be smoother. It doesn't fit very well with the other instruments with that much 'oomph'. I'd suggest lowering it's volume a bit and adding a little bit more reverb, or if you already have reverb on it, making it a bit fuller. I'm pretty sure I heard some square pings sidechained throughout the song, but you need to make those slightly louder, it's like they're getting walked over by every other part of the song.
I love ur stuff sir!!! also I play gd check me out I'm andogd. I make music, too check it out
Credits & Info
You might also enjoy…
SirHadoken 
Licensing Terms
You may only use this piece for commercial purposes if your work is a web-based game or animation, otherwise you must make specific arrangements with the artist.
![Mind Paradise [Purplerized]](https://aicon.ngfiles.com/1381/1381808_medium.webp?f1733695308)
