-still too much like PSYCHO92
+Very flowing with a nice melody
Can't say much else but good luck for the future!
Well done on the flash and high rating. Until then peace out
Maybe a bit too diverse?
You have a lot of nice licks here which could easly be songs of their own. I think the main problem with this song is the fact that it really doesn't flow. The parts you have sound pretty good but its hard to get in to as the melody keeps changing. Keep up composing man, but try not to rush.
Good luck in the future.