I enjoyed it for the most part. At around 2:00 it started to get really choppy and weird, but some people might enjoy that. That's why this gets a 4 instead of a 5. I enjoyed the vocals that came in at around 3:00 and I felt it mixed in the song well. All around, good job and I'm excited to hear more music from you in the future.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.