FyrStorm - NostalgiScape

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Hey guys. I made this song a while ago and left it in the depths of my files. But it seems like the songs that I don't upload immediately are the ones that people like the most. (i.e. Eternally Youthful) I don't even know what style this is, so I'm just gonna classify it as Video Game. Anyways, I'm gonna stop talking now and let you enjoy the song. Also, share with your friends if you liked it...if you want to, that is.

- Fyr (Not Fry)

Made completely in LMMS

:=: Edit :=:

Forgot to mention that I fixed it up for the competition. It was extremely crap before I turned it into this.


== This is an official NGUAC Review ==

Okay, so I have to say that the one thing I really like about this song is... almost every melody that that one plucky bell thing plays. (The one introduced at 0:27.) For instance, the little melodic motif at 0:38 to 0:44 is just great! THATS THE KIND OF MELODY I NEED MORE OF IN MY LIFE.

Unfortunately, you seem to have come down with a disease... the SOUND DESIGN DISEASE. It makes you unable to hear just what your sound design sounds like. Like, that harsh arpeggiated instrument that is in almost the entire song is both super de duper repetitive, but also far too loud. But even worse is the fact that it sounds really bad. A much more gentle tone, such as an acoustic guitar pluck or something, would have worked MILES better than the harsh and grating tone that you chose. This is basically the way I feel about nearly every instrument in this track (aside from the bell pluck thing, which is okay). Try listening to the sounds in other tracks and trying to imitate what they do.

All in all, nice compositional work, just needs some sound design love! =)

Mini-scores (not used to calculate final score in any way - just so you know what needs improvement):

Arrangement: 3/4
Composition: 3+/4
Sound Design: 1/4
Production: 2+/4

Overall: 7.8

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IMPKing6 responds:

Thanks for the review, and not to make this more awkward than it already is...this song was not allowed in the contest. Again, I appreciate the review, but this song was out of the whole NGUAC. :/

~ Fyr

Pretty nice, maybe a bit repetitive.

IMPKing6 responds:

Thanks! It was just a little song for the NGUAC...but it wasn't allowed. ;)

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4.13 / 5.00

Jul 14, 2017
2:14 AM EDT
Video Game
File Info
5.4 MB
3 min 40 sec

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