Hey ZinkZeta, nice job!
Just a few impartial advices I'd like to give you (I'm not an expert of house music but I do study classical music): from 0:50 up to 0:58 I hear (maybe just my ears) some strange turning on-off the volume, try to smooth it. Then, the drops aren't bad at all, but try to make the second different from the first by changing the main beats and not only by adding some melodic-deco.
I'm sure that you'll get better, 'cause I think you've a genius for this type of music. Keep it on :D
(Last thing: I'll see what I can do on GD with this song)
Well in order to use it on GD you have to use this link http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/754890 my friend is scouted