Nice try, though! I have observed that you derived the musical influence from the Armor of God. (And whatever you did in the title, it is blasphemy, LOL)
Technically speaking, you are full of potential. But the aspects of it, you lacked mastering/mixing techniques. In the beginning, the piano is very lonely. I think you should add some oozing pad, or orchestral string, in order to fill up the space or emptiness of sound.
Also, the distortions pulls down whatever epicness is happening. The drops needs more clarity. I think, the too much reverbation of synths drowns each and every aspects of the drop. In order to prevent distortions, especially when the kick strikes, sidechain the subbass with the signal to the kick. It is like dodging effect of volume of subbass, so that the lower territory of frequency will only host one instrument at a time, such as the kick. You can also do that in the synths and bass. You can peak the mid in the EQ, so that there is no feedback of bass will happen, that may result again to distortion. You can also peak the low mid in snare, in order to add oomph to your kick.
Other than that, I've enjoyed the track. Goodluck for your future productions. I hope you learned a lot. Still, I have just entered this realm, such as Newgrounds. But I am an artist that is VERY SIMILAR to XTRULLOR. He is a friend of mine. I have also read that you are very inspired by Xtrullor. Are you interested in a collab? I will teach you how to do lroduction like him... PM me if you are interested.