Okay, these strings right off the bat just sound terrible to me, too reverbed, trying too hard. Use another instrument if your string samples are that awful!
Mixing on this one isn't otherwise terrible, although those pad-y ah sounds need to come down some during the drops. Percussion also didn't really impress me much. Other than that, not too bad.
Drop isn't very satisfying. It sort of sounds like noise for the first couple measures. It sounds like a bunch of different basses pitch shifted from samples.
My pc shut off while I was revising this review. I'm just gonna leave it here!
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