Some clipping in the right ear, digital artefacts. Not sure what from. Later on in the track I hear more artefacts in the left.
Other than that, writing is good. Mixing is kinda off. Your guitars are lacking that searing 7-12k edge. They bleed a little bit into your bass which needs to be fixed on EQ. Your bass could use a bit more compression and more attention to the attack and release. Sometimes it stops short and sounds less organic for it.
This kinda reminds me of Korn and some old djent. Good sound. Lacking a little vision, but not bad by any means. I do like your guitar tone outside of the muffled sound. That could be coming from any EQ on the master even.
Outro was waaaaay too short and sounded kinda lazy. Should have at least been another repeat of that phrase.