Hey there, i have seen you want a review on this track. So here we go: First i like the bass bed in this track. Also the snare you chose fits in well. The strings need more verb to feel natural. Also you should NEVER write string lines right in the grid and forget to edit the dynamics / velocity to bring in sone diversity in sound. The part after the riser works very well IMO and also could have been a little bit longer for my taste. I would have gone gor an A - B - A structure here: Playing the celtic electro part after the raiser, changing the key signature and do some variation, going back to the A part and from there back to the start.
Overall good appendages. You should work more on the details and the production. But beside that its solid.