Everything seemed a little too reveerbed, but this sounded good for the most part. Needed a hihat, to up the speed. A little too slow paced for my liking, but at least u got the image across. Of a lumbering tank thing lol
Creates an atmosphere...
It's not bad, slightly simplistic in the beat, really doesn't boast much, which can hurt your big transitions a lot. The synths are really nice sounding, especially the LFO automation on them, sounded really nice with the combination of accents. Not the best I've heard, but you're on the right track with your synths, work on creating something more than then generic beat throughout the song, the beat barely changes but in the beginning.
-Would you check my audio?
i won't comment on the beat (sick of the techno 1,2,1,2,1...) but you got some really nice synths there, sounds real clear. keep it up and check out my latest trax if you wish.