I liked this! I thought the part in the middle where it went really high then dropped was cute! All in all a great song ^^
wheres the kick
ill five it for u, but theres way too much for u to work on, that I cant even think of where to start. Ill just start by suggesting put a beat in your next song. Without a kick u just have an empty song of different melodys. With a boom cheh boom cheh, this would sound alot more dancey
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