Overall really smooth writing. My critique would go on mix.
We're really heavy in mids -- good mixing of more live-y instruments and samples like the chimes and piano.
At times I feel, such as around 0:42 those fantasia sounding leads high up in predominantly the left channel are much too loud -- about a dB or two. They're such high frequencies, they're just going to be heard by virtue of being there. On drops they don't stick out as much later, but still overpresent.
At 2:19 there is mild clipping.
I would bring out your talking lead more, and possibly put a resonant auto-filter on it to bring it to the front more. A lot of the instrumentation stands out on top of it, leaving it to be heard as the lead only because it's the only instrument in that space moving.
I really like the chord progressions going on here and your writing itself. Thanks for sending me this!