I like the tranquil mood at the beginning. A couple of the flute/other woodwind instruments sounded a bit too harsh in my headphones - I’d suggest taking away some of the treble there with an equalizer. The melodic content of this piece is really good, though - has a smooth, flowing, relaxed feel. The snare might’ve been a bit hard-hitting compared to the cutesy nature of the melodic content. Same thing with the dramatic crashes (like at 1:55 and other places). You clearly have a good sense of harmony, and I think you nailed the mood and atmosphere. My main problem with the piece is that the texture needs a lot more variety. The melodies play on a near-constant loop, and even the transitions are overused by the end. The texture has a lot of pizzicato-y sounds that could be smoothed over with some pads - maybe you could even introduce them in a breakdown or bridge, just to add more variety. Cute, blissful and melodic piece, though. Keep at it, GoldHeartSenpai. :)
Thanks TaintedLogic! I'll keep that in mind :)
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