*Comments/Reviews/Advice much appreciated!*

(Second song of 'The Archer Girl', telling stories with the song)

What happened next after the "Crisis"?

Listen to the previous episode, "Crisis" here: http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/752784

Listen to the next episode, "The Archer Theme" here : http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/753797

"The zombies, fuming out toxic, still comes near you. You have no way to run. You stand still like a stone, but wait for your filter to end its operation. But just then you see a male hero coming from nowhere and defeat the monsters. He grabs you and takes to the way where there are safe from monsters.

The monsters chase you and him madly. The hero still grabs your hand, leading you to the top of a small building. He lets you go away and into the rescue helicopter while taking over the monsters. He says, 'Go to my daughter, Ari. She will be inside the house. And tell me... That I have been infected by the zombies and volunteered to save you.' And he gives you the remaining mask he was carrying.

You grab the mask, nods, and runs away.
Zombies are now all exploded by a huge bomb, with the hero himself. Only you survive, as the rescue helicopter lifts up from the ground."

Composed, mixed and story by Jessie Yun
Created with GarageBand (iPhone Version)

Cover artist : BelleDeesse
Link : http://www.wallpaperup.com/98283/Tomb_Raider_2013_Archers_Warriors_Rain_Games_Girls_rain.html

I made this just for fun, but if you have any comments/review/advice for this song, I'd love to hear it!

Soundcloud : https://soundcloud.com/jessie_yun/hero-is-here-original-work