Ima do the pros and cons thing again XD
Pros- I like the melody and everything, the name fits the song well. It's very happy and I like very happy! I also like the strings in the backround.
The snare rolls are placed very well XD good job! (Some people overuse or underuse snare rolls or just dont use them at all...)
Cons- that, reverbed clap that goes throughout the whole song on the quarter notes kinda distorts everything.
Also, I think you used FL keys, and FL keys is no good unless you FX the crap out of it to make it sound like a piano and not like a stale fl preset. I really like the melody with it though ^.^
Overall good work, could be a better song, just need to maybe get more familiar with the program? I don't question your melody making ability at all, you seem to be good at that. just maybe practice with different FX and stuff and automations to add tons of flare to your work. (I'm assuming you're using FL?)
Good job! Keep it up!
Thanks for the review & tips!
& Yes, I am using FL Studio.
I really liked this. Neat and crisp.
Thanks for the review, but here's a tip when you review you're next submission. I'm not trying to be mean, I'm just giving you some tips. Don't bitch at me. Thanks. ;)
-Tell the author in more detail what you liked and disliked.
-Tell them how to improve.
-Tell them why you gave them the score they got in Originality, Clarity, Diversity, Effort & Overall, along with all the ones in Flash submissions.
Again, thanks for the review!