I like the cute mood at the beginning. The chord progression is pretty cliche, and you have a couple of pretty sudden transitions in here, such as :48 and 2:00. I think the melodic content could use some more rhythmic variety. It’s also very strongly rooted in the chords, which gives it a bit of a stagnant and predictable feel. I’d encourage you to find ways of varying the piece besides adding and subtracting instruments - dynamic contrast, phrasing, crashes and risers, drum fills, etc. Speaking of drums, I think this piece could really use some more drum work, just to give it some drive and energy. The instrumentation is a bit generic, too. I’ve been tough on you in this review. The piece isn’t bad - you have a good sense of harmony and structure. It just needs a little more shape. You have a habit of modifying the texture every 4 or 8 bars like clockwork. That’s very predictable and dull. The best thing you can do for yourself right now is giving your music a constant sense of direction, whether it’s with dynamics, energy, or fleeting changes in the texture. Keep at it, MetafbiteAnimations. ;)

6/10