I liked it the more I listened, it does start out a bit unharmonious and chaotic at first, but it's a very nice original piece. 4d' and a nine.
thanks for the review.
i think it does have that growing effect on people, so i appreciate that you listened more than once :).
Sounded like this track only required 6 bars, sorry man :S
OK, fair enough.
I guess the changes I wrote into this (so that the song changed alot, at least by my standards) were very subtle. Maybe too subtle, and I might only notice them because I know they're there before-hand. I'll work on making prominent changes as the track goes along.
I appreciate the 10 for originality, 'cos I was really trying to do something different with this track.
Hopefully I'm on the right path, so I can keep getting better.
As a little side note--in your response you called me "a respected guy". Not sure who you think you're talking to, but I'm as anonymous as the next kid. Thanks anyways ;).
Thanks alot for the review.