I like the ominous mood at the beginning. The texture is very distorted, but it fits the character of the piece quite well. I like the sense of climax into :45, although I think the mix could be cleaner at that point. It’s really hard to make out the kick, and the snare could also be a bit stronger. You absolutely killed the atmosphere and mood, though. I appreciated the variety in the drop the second time around, although I couldn’t help but notice that the “verse” section is very repetitive. I think you need a lot more variety there, and some stronger melodic content couldn’t hurt. I’m really torn about this piece. Some of the compositional elements need some serious work, but you aced the sound design, mood, and atmosphere. Keep at it, Cyborgatron300! ;)
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