This is pretty good! One issue I had with it though, is 2:21 through 2:36 sounds a little bit boring and bland, I think you should add some more background sounds, and a better melody. Other than that, this song was pretty decent. I know nothing about music production, and this is my first feedback-like review, so I hope I made sense. :P
Hmm, good advice, although I don't really know how to make a "better melody"-that's like telling someone to "make good art", and this song wasn't very melody-driven in the first place. Maybe I'll add in some more background sounds tho, that could make it more interesting!
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