This is pretty good! One issue I had with it though, is 2:21 through 2:36 sounds a little bit boring and bland, I think you should add some more background sounds, and a better melody. Other than that, this song was pretty decent. I know nothing about music production, and this is my first feedback-like review, so I hope I made sense. :P
Author Comments
So this is the first song I'm uploading in a while ... it's not the first song that I've made in a while but I'm not sure I want to upload all the others. But for now here's this one, hope everyone enjoys it!
Please rate and review and help me to improve my music!
phoenixapprentice responds:
Hmm, good advice, although I don't really know how to make a "better melody"-that's like telling someone to "make good art", and this song wasn't very melody-driven in the first place. Maybe I'll add in some more background sounds tho, that could make it more interesting!
Credits & Info
- Listens
- 529
- Downloads
- 14
- Score
- Waiting for 1 more vote
- Uploaded
- Jun 19, 2017
- 1:22 PM EDT
- Genre
- Miscellaneous
- File Info
- Song
- 3.7 MB
- 3 min 14 sec
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