In my opinion:
1---Needs more FX like Impacts,Noise or Upfilters at the buildup or the drops to differenciate these.
2---The drop feels a bit empty. maybe with a sub-bass or a Piano-Pluck Chord would be great!
3---The growls are cool and the melody is beautiful! Cool song keep the good work bro
What this song has so far is very good, but it really lacks details, such as synth, an audible bass, counter-melody and decoration. It sounds like a base for an unfinished project. But the melody is very good so far. Needs work.
Funny both of our publisher names are both light lol