beautiful vibe. Make it loop? Change those 2 notes
I really liked the gentle vibe of this.
The basic melody is beautiful and when you play that bass note, it all really comes together.
The 2 notes that come in at the middle and end seem a bit forced and kinda break the flow, I felt.
The playing itself it steady and comes out flowing, like a gentle stream or a river.
Beautiful work, but maybe change the middle/ending bit. Also maybe either continue it and carry on with the interesting variations, or perhaps turn it into a 15s loop?