If you modify my music a little it will sound the same

Bien mon gars ! Je surveille ce que tu fais depuis un moment et tu t'améliores beaucoup, continue comme ça !

Sounds very good, but is repetative at some places. As a fellow musician, I understand how hard it can be to think up a good rythm or match the perfect beat. But still sounds very epic, great job!

The instrument at the beginning seems a little generic, and I think you have a couple of sudden transitions in this piece that change the texture very abruptly (:28, 1:36, 1:59, etc.). At :40, the kick gets a little buried in the mix. I’d suggest some more comprehensive equalization and compression. The melodies at 1:04 are a bit frantic, and are somewhat overwhelmed by the high chords that first come in at :51. I like the texture at 1:36 - offers some nice structural contrast too compared with the energy of the chorus. The mood and atmosphere are cool, but I think you could’ve made the melody a lot more memorable and catchy if it was both slower and varied more rhythmically. The piece also ends a bit abruptly. Overall, you have a good sense of how to create harmony, texture, and variety. Focusing a little more on mixing and mastering as well as the melodic content would really help this piece. Keep at it, man. ;)

6/10

my legs rn are trying to catch up with the beat. Lets just say, my legs had a seizure... well played.