The synths at the beginning are a little harsh and distorted. I’d suggest some more careful equalizing to at least remove some of the treble tones. The melodic content at :52 is enjoyable, although I wasn’t a huge fan of this track’s instrumentation - when it’s not harsh and jarring, it’s cliche. There’s also not a ton of structural variety or melodic development here, and the melodies remain very simple throughout. The loop was pretty smooth, although I would’ve liked to see you flesh out the structure of this piece a little more. Overall, there’s a lot more you could’ve done with the composition here. I would’ve liked to hear more harmonic depth, and I also thought you could’ve done a lot more with the percussion here. It’s not all bad, though - the piece has a good atmosphere, and is also fairly catchy. Keep at it, man!
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