I really like it. I think you certainly have talent and are capable of becoming very well known. My only advice is to try and get a little more creative with the rhythm, as in have it change up sometimes. But certainly very good.
OMG THANKS! It is great to have someone who had comments suggestions to my work! I am working hardly with my music for the better future. :)
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