Not bad, fairly empty sounding spatially and a little repetitive. This definitely wouldn't suffer from having some percussion to give those arpeggios weight earlier on. Also, what perc you do have could be louder. Again, buried by the melody and harmony majorly. Compress those drums hard.
Doesn't sound bad, but it takes a while to get where it's going, and mixing decisions make it hard to get into.
Thanks for the suggestions! Yeah, I do think the percs could be a lot more noticeable, huh?
Hopefully, I can improve on mixing more. Drums and "spacious" sounds are especially hard for me.
I love the strings! Great composition :)
Thanks :D ! It was one of the songs that got me thinking about making a cartoon.
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