Yo ma Man, this is totally Ok. If I had heard this in some cafe or chill party, I would never say that this is the amateurish work.
And few constructive advices, for future works:
In this kind of Genre (also in all other) you'll need to bring a little bit more variety.
For example: some extra melody, more transition parts, experimentation-improvisation parts etc...
Yes, it is Repetitive but not to much boring. But, hearing this more times (over 5) it starting to be a boring repetition and little bit monotonous, like a techno.
Production is Ok. Pro ;)
P.S. I actually smoked one of those funny cigs while typing this review.
If you didn't heard this you better search on YT for:
The In Crowd - Back a yard, cactus/long version '78.
thx for the tips.. my mindset here was to keep it simple but it ended up a bit too simple :)
Your bass is all muddy and is difficultly heard throughout the song. The song also feels somewhat empty, but I like the drumbeat and theme. If the bass was higher, maybe lowpassed around 2500, it would've sounded better imo.
It's an attempt after all.
dude you need a subwoofer in your life
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