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Jun 3, 2017 | 2:12 PM EDT
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6.8 MB
2 min 59 sec
4.08 / 5.00

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Rated 4.08 / 5 stars
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First song in FL and im pretty happy with it
120 bpm
key in F#major



Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

I like the tranquil mood at the beginning and the percussion in the background. The synth at :16 has a cool melody, but at the same time is a bit cliche. I also think the melody gets a little buried in the mix at :32 when those strong pads come in. The texture at :48 is a little bizarre, and seems to have an excess of reverb. I appreciated the structural relief you offer at 1:23. I also think this piece is really smooth-flowing and has a really neat atmosphere. It’s really a shame the mix doesn’t have more clarity, though, because I think the melodic content gets really buried during the refrains. I also think the piece ends a bit abruptly. I wanted to give you a higher score, but unfortunately the mixing really detracted from my enjoyment of the piece. I’d highly recommend toning down the reverb and tightening up the equalization on those thick pads at 2:09. Keep at it, man. ;)



Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Great song!

The intro really caught my attention :)
The evolution was perfect until 0:35, where the pad felt too loud and seemed to cover the other instruments. At 0:45 or so (also at 2:09), same thing with the pad that goes on and off like a wub; try making it more quiet so it doesn't ruin all the calm ambiance that you built just before ;)

Other than this, the overall arrangement/structure of the song was really cool. Nice song! :)