I like the chords and the presets you used. The part around 1:30 and the part before the outro really show how much you've improved. I like it a lot. However the bassline gets a bit repetetive after a while and the drum sequences miss some variations (in my opinion). But don't let that bring you down cus it's still a good piece of work
You may only use this piece for commercial purposes if your work is a web-based game or animation, otherwise you must make specific arrangements with the artist.