This piece is cute and I think it has a lot of potential to be good. The melody in the intro is simple and catchy and builds up nicely. I can hear what you're aiming for, but I think the mix is a bit off, with the drums being too loud in the verse, then way too quiet in the chorus after the drop where they really should be driving force behind the section.
Also, I'm not too sure about the 3/4 timing after the drop. Maybe it's one of those things that my ear would adjust to after a few listens, but it feels like it's begging to be in 4/4 instead.
At 0:48 there's a weird dissonant note in that chord.
I see that you're only 11 and this is really impressive for your age. Keep writing and learning and improving and you'll be great in a few years!
Thanks for the constructive criticism! I agree that I need to work on drops a bit more.
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