The long intro with the white noise and ambience was a bit confusing, and the synth at :25 sounds a bit harsh and high-pitched. I’d suggest taking some of the treble tones off of it with an equalizer. Same with the pulsing wave effects and the synth that comes in at around :50, in fact. The melodic material here is pretty good, but the progression is really slow, and the mix is not very well-balanced, missing a lot of lower frequencies and fill. The transition at 2:20 was very sudden, and there are a lot of generic-sounding instruments around that point, especially the snare at 2:43. The piece is pretty catchy, and it’s also fairly well-structured. The transitions are often quite sudden, though, and the harsh mixdown detracted from my enjoyment of the piece a lot, unfortunately. Part of it could be the instrumentation - I’d suggest listening to the piece with headphones to really make sure you want it to sound that harsh in the upper register. I also really don’t think the piece needed to be 8 minutes long. There are also a lot of moments of minimalism in the piece - perhaps some more reverb could help smooth that over a bit. Overall, it has some potential. There are some amusing riffs here. Keep at it, FGK2015! :)
This is a very great remix of my song Dubstep Machine! I have a minor concern about the pitch rise at 5:39 as it may not be pleasing to some people because it goes so high (but I won't count off for that).
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
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