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A song I made with Ableton inspired by my sister when I was trying to teach her how to make a melody. While I was teaching her, I came up with this melody and put it together as a song. Hope you enjoy!

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Nice song! The only improvable point I see is the melody at the beginning; it feels a bit too repetitive. Try varying it a little more (at least after the first four measures). For the ending, it feels like it would need a crash cymbal, or some other transition effect. The rest was really good! I like the build-up & drop around 1:24 and the "madness"-ish effect at 2:44 :)


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ClockbeatAdelony87 responds:

Thanks for the advice! I see what you mean by the beginning is too repetitive. And I'm not a big fan of crash cymbals, so that's why you might notice a lot of crash cymbals in my songs, but I'll try to add some in future songs.
Thanks again :)

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May 29, 2017
10:14 PM EDT
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3 MB
3 min 19 sec
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