I like the relaxed mood at the beginning. That synth at the beginning sounds a little hollow and thin, though. I like the atmospheric vibe. The piece is very smooth, which set up the transition at :38 well. I think the drums could’ve been a lot stronger, especially the snare. Usually the snare should be the loudest instrument in the mix, and this is no exception. This is a pretty well-structured piece, but I would’ve liked to hear a little more variety later in the piece, especially since the melody repeats so often. A lot of your instruments here are pretty generic (the clap and lead synth especially). Still, the piece is enjoyable because of the mood, atmosphere, and melodic content. Overall solid work!
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