The vibrato on the pads at the beginning doesn’t quite synchronize with the beat. Maybe that’s a little picky, though. I like the drums that come in shortly thereafter, but the piece is pretty slow to develop overall. I think you need a stronger transition at 1:12. Usually it’s a good idea to have a couple of instruments bleeding over from the previous section just to smooth it over. The vocal samples at around 2:10 were cool, but by this point I’m really itching for some melodic content. The piece has a long period of continuity without significant changes in energy or dynamics, which is concerning. You also fail to address or recapitulate the theme from the first minute or so of the piece during the latter half. I didn’t notice any particular problems with the mixing and mastering, though, so that’s a huge plus. You have a well-balanced texture throughout, but overall the piece needs a lot more coherence and shape, and probably a more melody-driven structure. A lot of the other aspects of the piece - sound design, harmonies, etc. - were quite enjoyable, though. Keep at it, man!
To be fair, this track is kind of experimental and was more of a focus on sound and atmosphere; rather than something very melodic. However, I am more leaning towards making melodies, even in my ambient music, because I do notice how much more they add to a track.
That being said, these are all very fair criticisms and ones I will take notice when I make more music in the future. ^^ I appreciate your honest feedback and do love how fair, but constructive people are on this site. :D
cool song i like it
Thank you. Glad you like and thanks for the follow too. Got plenty more music coming on the way.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.